Nope. Just.. Nope.
I've given you 5 stars for the animation. I've tried to focus on the animation and not the song, but that's impossible. I can see which style your going for - It's cool, but I'm just not fond of that animation.
There's a lot of effort here - sadly enough It's effort wasted on this song.
The song is really terrible, there's no feeling to it and whoever sang it can't pronounce a word without embarrasing me for listening.
I feel bad for lowering this but I couldn't live with myself if I didn't. Whoever sang this should be thrown in Jail.